help lb engleza!!!:*:*

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    • 199 mesaje
    3 Iun 2008, 17:35
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    sunt clasa a VI-a. calm down! v-as ruga sa ma ajutati la tema mea la lb engleza. nu aveti altceva de facut decat sa ma corectati.




    Invent a story for a newspaper article about one of these topics:
    - graffiti
    - street performers
    - a dispute between neighbours




    Am ales graffiti.




    Graffiti artist at 6 years

    John Michael from Leeds, UK is a famous graffiti artist at only 6 years. He has done graffiti since he has stolen a graffity spray from one of the backstreet boys who has been doing graffiti. John Michael says that he always wanted to know how so many of this kind of painting appear on the walls.
    One night, he was watching the backstreet boys spraying the walls of a block of flats. He was so excited so he waited the moment he could steal one spray. He knew that he mustn't talk with the backstreet boys because they are bad boys. After about ten minutes, the backstreet boys had a little break of smoking. Little John stole a spray and ran at home with it.
    The next day, he tried to imitate the other graffiti and practising, and practising ... he became a real artist.
    People pay him to make their walls cool. This is his job now and his parents are proud of him.
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    • 939 mesaje
    3 Iun 2008, 17:49
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    Felicitari !

    - sugestie : This passion started when he stole a graffity spray from one of the backstreet boys who has been doing graffiti.

    - sugestie : John Michael says that he always wanted to know how so many graffiti paintings appear on the walls.

    - He knew that he must'nt talk (sau MUST NOT) with the backstreet boys because they are bad boys.

    - After about ten minutes, the backstreet boys had a little break of smoking - cigarette break.

    Inca o data, bravo
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    • 199 mesaje
    3 Iun 2008, 18:24
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    Multumesc! Nu prea ma asteptam sa ma ia cineva in serios.
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    • 939 mesaje
    3 Iun 2008, 18:38
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    De ce nu, daca e pt o cauza buna ?
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    • 233 mesaje
    3 Iun 2008, 20:21
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    o alta sugestie (doar)....

    Graffiti artist at 6 years old

    At only 6 years old , John Michael from Leeds, UK is a famous graffiti artist.
    He has been doing graffiti ever since he has stolen a graffiti spray from one of the backstreet boys . John Michael says he always wanted to know how do so many paintings appear on the walls.
    One night, he was watching the backstreet boys spraying the walls of a block of flats. He was so excited that he waited for a moment to steal a spray. He knew that he mustn't talk with the backstreet boys because they are bad boys. After about ten minutes, the backstreet boys took a little break for smoking. Little John stole a spray and ran home with it.
    The next day, he tried to imitate the other graffiti and in time by practicing, and practicing ... he became a real artist.
    Nowadays ,people pay him to make their own walls look cool. This is his job now and his parents are proud of him.
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    • 251 mesaje
    4 Iun 2008, 07:59
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    ... since he STOLE (adica past tense, nu present perfect)...
    ... ran home (adica fara AT)...
    ... BY practising...
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    • 1151 mesaje
    4 Iun 2008, 23:09
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    laperla fata a scris bine
    "mustn't" nu must'nt cum ai scris tu ..

    He knew that he must'nt talk ..eu zic ca e gresit ..,poate ai scris la repezeala dar se ia fata dupa tine si mai rau o incurcam in loc sa o ajutam